comm207fall06
a weblog for Pete Ellertsen's students in Communications 207 (editing for publication) at Benedictine University/Springfield. Link here to my faculty page.Tuesday, September 19, 2006
well writen news story
http://www.chicagotribune.com/news/nationworld/chi-0609190160sep19,1,4931259.story?coll=chi-newsnationworld-hed
"More than 300,000 Americans each year die of cardiac arrest. Without help, death occurs within 10 minutes, before an ambulance can arrive." With this doll being available so you can learn the true value of saving someone's life. Then when you feel comfortable you can go and registure for a 4 hour CPR class so you can be certified.
"More than 300,000 Americans each year die of cardiac arrest. Without help, death occurs within 10 minutes, before an ambulance can arrive." With this doll being available so you can learn the true value of saving someone's life. Then when you feel comfortable you can go and registure for a 4 hour CPR class so you can be certified.
posted by Jeremy # 1:37 PM 
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Good, Jeremy. Thanks for posting.
What do you think of the way the story was written? As we go along, I'm going to try to mess with your mind so whenever you read a newspaper you read it *for style* -- like how'd he do that? Is that well written? How would I do it different? And so on.
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What do you think of the way the story was written? As we go along, I'm going to try to mess with your mind so whenever you read a newspaper you read it *for style* -- like how'd he do that? Is that well written? How would I do it different? And so on.
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